Needs something...
Hmm well, the Cityscape looks comrimising annd your Charcacter art isn't too bad. But, i have no idea what was going on. A Little Explanation about this flash would be nice. The Buildings also should appear a darker variation to match with that type of brightness in my opinion.
Overall, its looking decent, just needs some work. Good luck.
I'd agree with that, and thanks for the review. Thing is, this took me almost 30 hours to do, because I am very new to flash. It's a very short trailer (a teaser if you will), just to see if anyone would want to see a full version of the movie.
Magnificant SPlendor!!
Dude!! Its been such a long time since I seen the first one!! I truly miss this series and am glad that a second was created.
The Artwork is superb as usual and the Voices are extremely well done. The Animation is top notch with the use of Frame by Frame animation and it has a amazing style to it. I really like your humor as well. Oh, and I heard some old and new songs done by you in this excellent flash as well.
Your Hard work has truly payed off Marcus. ;-)
The Only thing I would suggest is, in the beginning of the flash where the Gun, Book, and Clock is displayed. Perhaps some lettering could be added to show what icon's purpose is.
Hmm.. yeah, I thought of labeling the icons. But didn't do it because it is a preloader and if I label things, people will not try out of curiosity...
I hope you ALL read the book before viewing the movie. This will help you to grasp the story.
Magificantly portrayed
The Voice is well done and the lip syncing is nicely coordinated. But the artwork of everything "except the charcters" was somewhat lacking. I understood what happen in the end even if it was rushed. The Great thing about this flash is it is based after a Story of Legend. Very rare to see such things and I commend you for doing so. Nice job.
Excitment and Suspense awaits.
This Flash was truly impressive. Nice use of the sprites and music. And the Storyline behind was throughly planned.
This Story , in my opinion, seems like the Beginning of the Rivalty of the Mushroom Kingdom vs. the Koopas. An event that occured before the Rise of the Mushroom Kingdom Flash. haha, well thats what I see but this stays true to its 8bit quality.
Exceptionally Done...
This was very impressive for a Rave Music Video. The High Rapid beat of the SOng (I say 160beat-per-minute) really pump this video at a high Intensity Level. The Graphics was also excellent composed. I love the use of ASC, Graphic Art, and Vector Graphics. This movie just amazingly blends and twist in a great sense. I also noticed when the Phase of the song changed, your art seemed to have interepted with Video games. ;-) A very nice touch.
Another thing I realized was I seen that cat figure in another flash. http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view.php?id=65628 It was here that I reconized that odd cat with the Mouth? Any reasons why?
Well, in conclusion, this Rave Music Video is one of the finest examples of flash I've seen and would have won Daily Feature Award on another day.
SBC shouldn't drive afterall!
Well, I know the theme behind it but its odd in a funny sense. Shouldn't the Cambell Can..should have been crushed? haha. But I can see why SBC shouldn't drive. You made that point Clear. haha. Hope to see more works.
thanks, i am working on a new flash, glad u liked
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