Adventure unfolds!
Well, I'll comment on what I think.
The locks in the beginning requred its center "lock" piece to move about to stimulate a better transition of speech. Same could be said for StrawberryClock.
The Music needs to be compressed by all means, at least by streaming. A simple way is to make your new scene and paste all the frames of each scenes into your first scenes. Then setting the sound on "stream", should help out much. The Artwork still needs a bit of improving and the end was kinda lacking..
Good points of this film was the FPS rate. Sorry thats all I can see for now. :-) But lightsabers! Good to see that!
Just keep practicing and you'll produce a better result. Good luck.