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[FFVI:The Day After Part14]

Much Improvements! Great use of sprites.

Impressive work Vince. Glad to see you have improve much since the last episode. I found your battles great to behold. The movement and animation was right-on.

As always, great story and choice of music. Another addition I noticed was your text box and enlarged bitmaps. Glad you finally implenated that.

Another big thing was more variation of sound effects and visual effects. Glad to have seen it Vince.

Conclusion: A great final fantasy sprite movie that details on story and graphics.

-BR

Vinstigator responds:

This is one of the best reviews so far! Thanks BR!

[Crimson Moon Ep 2 Prt 1/3]

Promising Story that broods on "Vampires"

Ah, great to see your new art! Your characters are better defined. I enjoy the perspective views for the backgrounds but stars just don't hang that low. haha. But aside from that, use of perspective was great. Glad to see the walking was the fluid movement of the foot.I also noticed the blur effects. That was keen! But I'm a bit unaware still of why Ky seems to follow Tray though he's been betrayed. Guess I'll found soon enough.

It seemed odd that voices were used in the introduction that converted to texts.

Well, neverless excellent job Danthi, I'm awaiting to see what you have planned for the next episode!

-Richard "BR"

Danthi responds:

Hey BR! Glad you review no#2.
Ah! yes the relationship of Ky & Tray, I'll explain a bit about it...Despite the fact that Tray betrayed Ky (who where best friends before, they are still kind of friends also at the same time they are rival but that will be reviled soon.
Thanks for your review BR! I know I haven’t been buy the Lightsaber crew forum lately, but I will try to visit sometime.

Jason "Danthi" Whalley

[icewind Dale: Part 1]

Intrelope Storyline set in a fantasy timeline.

Astonishing. I haven't seen a serious fantasy film in some time. Your prologue was well done, with the music working with the scenes.

Your artwork is extremly detailed but not as much compare with your backgrounds. The Character expressions were great. Perhaps adding a subtitle for the location the setting is at? (Such as Ten-towns?) Icewind Dale was a great game / triolgy and I'm glad to see you worked to its setting.

The Voices were sensational in my thought and you pull off this work quite well. I see quite a number of previews and trailers in your "other submissions", haha, well I hope to its grand sequel.

[NG Army News 1]

Artwork needs work, Goals were met.

Hmm not bad. The voices as you mentioned could clarify a bit more. The artwork of the NG army's members were decent. The Background on the alley seemed to come alive as a NES background ,haha. The messages were entertaining to read and the news content was good.

What needs to be added is subtitles for the diologues and a short name tag for each time a new member is screened. That could very well distinguish who is who.

To Paul, this flash defnitely improved over your last one(s). Keep improving man!

-BR

TheNGArmy responds:

Thanks man, i really appreciate that. I'll go back and add the names of each person as they appear. I'll see about subtitles in a week or two if the audio tweeking doesn't pan out.

Thanks for the review!

[One Wish]

Great but Predictable

Hmm, well I got to say, this was a good film. As many has mentioned already, you placed a great deal on emotions.

What I was impressed by was your use of objects to layers zoom pans. Yeah, some of the perspective was incorrect but, its only a minor technical. Also, that window looked awfully like a picture frame. (Hey works with your next scene!)

I say your art was pretty good, you definitely got your handle down for motion tweening and replicating human movement (the running, the hand signals, the basketball dunk, oh my!)

Music- ah, my favorite catergory, good choice of music. Yeah, it is from the Spiderman movie, by Danny Elfman. Please credit him, if would do good.

Overall, wow, one wish has come true.
(Your from Hawaii, Mi? (Maui?) Didn't think I find anyone from Hawaii! Keep at it Cuz!)

AligatorHead responds:

"hoa brah, i fro hawaii cuz"
haha
yeah
Oahu!!!
MILILANI
but yeah
im just like a regular person an di hate talking like that glad you enjoyed it.

[Zomborg Apocalypse - 006]

Intriguing..

This series just keeps getting better. Your background and character design are very slick.

What striked me the most, was your new Zombie, this... giant of a brute. You placed a great detail in that model.

Great story,art, use of music and narrations. Definitely will be looking for your 7th.

SPLANKGY responds:

thanks man! I am happy! thanks!

[Whitmore the Toad Pirate3]

All tales comes to a end.

Well, a great musical to end this series.It had a great minor chord, with a nice melody to it. The words worked well as well. That Toad and the other characters sure had a strange personality. This was a great series, and I'm assuming you ended this to make way for other series?

Neverless, the voices were great with the accent and all. haha. I'm looking forward to your next succesful series. You might want to add a replay button at the end.

EdibleCastle responds:

thank you for your kind words.

[Mr DRAGOoN BREATH]

Marcus is at it again!

Nice to see a another excellent flash from Marcus. You got a great style, and make great use of FbF and motion tweening. But its the humor that create that I find admirable.

I'm still boggling why the Knight ran in fear.. perhaps because of bad breath (Dragoon Breath)?

Nice musical short you got there, still the musician I see. Great flash and I'm looking forward to the next Detective Frofrog.

McRhyme responds:

Someone who remembered me! That's awsome! The thing about the breath is not bad. Maybe I should have added some green vapour from his jaws?

[Frijolero(Beaner)]

Nicely done.

Excellent Video Rigo. I was impressed by much of the content in this video such as your character design, mouth syncing, and backgrounds.

It had a great theme behind it and I admire that. Also great idea with using partial hand movement of the wrist.

Guess the only thing I saw as a problem would overuse of the gringo-the beander and the trio scene but then again, it is the chrous line so its acceptable. (Wheres the replay button! haha)

Overall, very well done music video and looks very promising for a future episode. You get my 5! Good luck Rigo.

CheveLoco responds:

this was my first time i did the lip syncing so i was really happy when i saw that it came out better than expected...that scene you talk about...well i had some other ideas but seeing how it was the chorus i decided to just repeat it...oh yeah i forgot the replay button lol...thanx

[-The Monster 2-]

Munmunmunster!!!

Incredible. The Claystyle in this is very well done. Your animation of the Clay figures were excellent. The movement of the mouth was excellent, (especially the syncing), the movement of there bodies, and the facial features, is what makes you stand out from Knox's clay movies.

It had a good joke, not very laughable but good neverless. Excellent work Toxicbomb, you proved to me you got great patience. 1,500 pictures... my god.

toxicbomb responds:

haha thank you! It did take some time, but i was happy with the results(besides the story). Thanks for your review BahamutReborn!!!!