Exceptionally Done..
Ah, Part 8. This one contained better Battle Animation. And the plot was cool but for the airship scene, I recommend the movement of the Sky's background if possible.
The Story progressed well and was enjoyable. That scene with the Airship landing was a nice touch, glad you added that. Your diologue were well organized. I especially like the Battle Scene, nicely done I must say.
I know you used Swish for the Text Intro, its effects is always dazzling. I also notice the Preloader Bar didn't seem to go but the Bytes showed. You did well choosing the theme music for each scene and the personality set for each charc. It still boggles me on what role Shadow Plays...
Neverless, Great Work once again Vince, I hope to see a Part9!